Okay, edited it some. Not much has changed, but I fixed some grammar and sentence structure that was bugging me.
I'm not quite sure where to place this.
And sorry for the humongous paragraphs.
Okay, so this was written for my college composition class. We had to do a descriptive paper. I loved doing this compared to a dumbass essay (no offense to anyone who writes/likes them, they're just not my thing), which is why I'm actually uploading it here. I really hate writing essays, so you can imagine my excitement when I was told that we had to write a paper on anything we wanted, but had to fill it with description.